We have been learning to add dialogue (speech/people talking) to our descriptive writing. to do this we have to work hard and we have to talk about the story. we have to think and find our own fairy Tale, I put in peter pan the movie and a tiger flying and also the three little pigs. the tiger was going to eat me because I was trying to lead him to the police station so i can put him in jail but the three little pigs got eaten by the tiger.
Once Upon a Time there was a fairy but he wasn’t a girl (name Peter Pan). There was also a lady and her name was Wendy. haaaaaaaaaaaaaa! (crashing through the window) said Peter pan. oh hi my name is peter pan and i am a fairy but I am not a girl I am a boy. I already know that, said Wendy. oh so I got to go now, bye said peter pan. Wait! How real are you? oh I came from my home but it is a long way to get there so I should be going, said Peter pan. five hours later. How there is a fairy you say captain hook. Where is it? oh it just left, said Wendy Dad. I will find it and drain all the power down with my mega machine. haaaaaaa! said Peter Pan. hi I am back and i was thinking do you want to come with me. Yes! said Wendy. come on my back and hold on because I am going fast, said Peter pan. Wendy said, “Are you sure?” ok here we go! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! I didn’t know you were going this fast said Wendy. ok ok ok i will slow down said peter pan. yes please! said wendy. Is this ok? said Peter Pan. yep said wendy. I will sing a song three two one and … wait i see…captain hook (whisper) said peter pan. yes there you are, I find you said captain hook. ok I have to get out of here so bye said peter pan. Where are you going? said Wendy. I am taking you back home said Peter Pan. Will Peter Pan was taking Wendy back home. We saw a big bad lion that could fly, which meant there was trouble. Why are you taking me hame said Wendy. Peter Pan said, I saw Cap… are you ok said Wendy. aaaaaa no I am not ok because I just saw a tiger flying past us. Where did it go then said wendy. move move move move,! said captain hook said,. we need to go faster to catch peter pan so I can get him into my machine. haaaaaaaaaaaa,! said Wendy. I just saw the flying tiger. (wosh!) The tiger went by Peter Pan. ummm what is that said wendy. I do not know,said Peter Pan. I think it is a hole and I see the tiger over there! ok that was the wrong way said peter pan. o right you are taking me back home right said wendy. o about that i was thinking that i need your help to get away from the tiger and captain hook said peter. ok I will help you from the tiger and captain hook said wendy. now we do, we go , said Peter Pan. we have to get rid of the tiger first stupid, said Wendy. ok peter pan we have to make a plan first said wendy. What’s the plan said pete pan. ok. listen up. hi tiger do you want me, said peter pan. ok come and get me scared cat. ok i will get you,said the tiger. when i get you i will eat you said the tiger. wait… i did not now you can talk. (wosh) so far i am still coming for you and i am going to eat you, said the tiger. o right, i am going to the police station,. weeeeeeeee this is fun right little, tiger. wait is the three little pigs!, said peter pan. Oops I think that i said it loud guys you better run because a tiger is coming for you guys said peter pan. ok guys lets build our house fast ok guys said the oldest pig. wosh the tiger went fast then last time. go and runnnnnnnnnnnnn! said the oldest pig. Chomp Chomp Chomp the tiger eats the three little pigs. Woohoo I’m over here do you want to eat me too you know said peter pan wosh… wosh peter pan went fast and the tiger went fast too so peter pan went to the police. Next time I am going to white even more white.